Just
a quick note: A parallel poem
Sorry
To have
Changed
The lock
Though
I had
Strongly
Wished
There
Would
Never
Be
Such
Need
Sorry
To have
Changed
The lock
Though
I had
Strongly
Wished
There
Would
Never
Be
Such
Need
Changming Yuan, 4-time Pushcart nominee and author of Chansons of a Chinaman,
grew up in rural China, holds a PhD in English, and currently works as a
private tutor in Vancouver; his poetry has appeared in nearly 510 literary publications
across 20 countries, including Asia
Literary Review, Barrow Street, Best Canadian Poetry, BestNewPoemsOnline,
London Magazine, Paris/Atlantic, Poetry Kanto, Poetry Salzburg Review, SAND and Taj Mahal Review.
A strong poem Chanming that speaks of betrayal. It makes great impact the way you've laid out the poem.
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Reminds me of some of William Carlos Williams works in its brevity and pith.
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